Is this a decent argument and what is the term for the blackberries, laptops and computers?

My essay is about how technology has changed the world of business. Advances in communication, productivity and Internet have become the tools that have revolutionized the vast global trade.

You must reduce a little. The word "broad" is his argument seems to be endless. Try something shorter, like "Progress in the technology business have become indispensable to the success of the commerce industry. "

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